If you won a million dollars what things would you change about your life?

Hello Jenna!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

I think if I won a million dollars I’ll donate half of that. 

>> I think if I won a million dollars, I’ll donate half of it. 

My goal of life is helping others. 

>> My goal in life is to help others. 

So first of all I want to donate. 

>> So first of all, I want to donate. 

Still I’m feeling happiness from helping others but if I donate many moneys then I can feel more happiness. 

>> I feel happiness from helping others, but if I donate a lot of money to others, then I will feel happier. 

That is why I live. 

>> That is what I live for.

Thank you.

>> CORRECT!