If you would celebrate something special, how would you celebrate it? Why?
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This is exciting, Sir [이름]!
This is a fun way to have outdoor activities like trick or treat which most kids find it very interesting. It could also be a family activity. Hang in there yet, you still have months to go to prepare for the Halloween. Great thoughts!
~Teacher Eunice
I would like to celebrate Halloween, because it is not the day Korean commonly celebrate.
>>> I would like to celebrate Halloween, because it is not the day that Koreans commonly celebrate.
I have experienced to celebrate Halloween when I was in UAE and I remember that my children really enjoyed it.
>>> I have experienced to celebrate Halloween when I was in the UAE, and I remembered that my children really enjoyed it.
We wore special clothes like batman, spider man and then visited our neighbor asking some candies.
>>> We wore special clothes like batman, spider man and then visited our neighbors asking some candies.
My son was really active to get candies even though he is a introvert person.
>>> My son was really active to get candies even though he is an introvert person.
I realized that special activities make my son active.
>>> Correct!
He has changed his character to good way.
>>> He has changed his character in a good way.
I am planning to celebrate Halloween this year and will prepare special gifts for my children.
>>> I am planning to celebrate Halloween this year, and we will prepare special gifts for my children.
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