If you would commend someone close to you, who would it be and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I'd like to commend a friend who is a my classmate of college.
He is kindhearted and he always takes the lead in the charity work.
He helps people in the worst situation.
Once, but it happened before more than 30years, after the practice class, all of students went back to their home. The practice room was a big mess. I saw a person cleaning the room alone. I helped him and I strated to be closed to him after that time.
A person is that friend.
In spite of passing 30 years, though not too open, I am meeting him and we are still friend.
강사 첨삭
Hello there Sir [이름]!
It\'s really good to have close friends with whom you can confide your secrets.
I hope that your friendship will go stronger.
See you in class!
~Teacher Shanee^^,
I\'d like to commend a friend who is a my classmate of college.
>>> I\'d like to commend a friend who was my classmate in college.He is kindhearted and he always takes the lead in the charity work.
>>> Correct!He helps people in the worst situation.
>>> Correct!Once, but it happened before more than 30years, after the practice class, all of students went back to their home.
>>> There was this one incident 30 years ago after our practice class, all of the students went back to their home.
The practice room was a big mess.
>>> Correct!
I saw a person cleaning the room alone.
>>> Correct!
I helped him and I strated to be close to him after that time.>>> Correct!A person is that friend.
>>> That person was my friend.In spite of passing 30 years, though not too open, I am meeting him and we are still friend.
>>> In spite of the 30 years that passed, though not too often, I meet him and we are still friends.
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