If your boss were to suggest that your group at work took up a team sport in order to help you work
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If I were close to our colleages and boss, I like doing a team sport. because it is hard to join the clubs when I got a job. so, we need a promote freindship. and can make a new hobby. as a team at work better, result to well done.
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Hey, Clara.
Thank you for another homework well done. Just be aware of the capital letters at the beginning of the sentences. Keep it up. I\'ll talk to you on Monday. Enjoy the weekend! ~ teacher Jane ^___^
If your boss were to suggest that your group at work took up a team sport in order to help you work better as a team at work, how would you react?
If I were close to our colleages and boss, I like doing a team sport.
>>> If I were to get close to my colleagues and boss, I\'m willing to take up a team sport.
because it is hard to join the clubs when I got a job.
>>> Because it is hard/difficult to join clubs if I got a job.
so, we need a promote freindship. and can make a new hobby.
>>> It promotes friendship and it can be a new hobby.
as a team at work better, result to well done.
>>> As a team, we can work better and come up with positive results.
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