If your life was a movie, what would it be and why?

2022-07-18 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I can compare to my life to the movie Dark Knight. It\'s because I got impressed to watch that. Also, it was so cool that he tried to sacrifice himself as a villain so that he wouldn\'t surrender to evil. And I wanna do that, For things that I have important. First I should make important things. :)

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Hi Elio! :)

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I can compare to my life to the movie Dark Knight.

>> I can compare to my life to the movie \"Dark Knight\".

It\'s because I got impressed to watch that.

>> It\'s because I was impressed when I watched it.

Also, it was so cool that he tried to sacrifice himself as a villain so that he wouldn\'t surrender to evil.

>> CORRECT

And I wanna do that, For things that I have important.

>> And I want to do that too to the things that are really important.

First I should make important things. :)

>> First, I should make important things.

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