If your life was a movie, what would it be and why?

2022-07-19 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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In my opinion, my life would be just a calm, still movie. I was just born, and I have more time to live. I haven\'t experienced a big happening yet, so I think my life world be just a calm movie if my life we a movie. But I hope that my movie is going to be more and more full of thrills.

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In my opinion, my life would be just a calm, still movie.

>> In my opinion, my life would be like just a calm and still movie.

I was just born, and I have more time to live.

>> CORRECT

I haven\'t experienced a big happening yet, so I think my life world be just a calm movie if my life we a movie.

>> I haven\'t experienced a big happening yet, so I think my life world be like a calm movie.

But I hope that my movie is going to be more and more full of thrills.

>> But I hope that my movie will be filled with more and more thrills.

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