If your life was in danger, who would you call and why?

2022-08-11 · 첨삭 강사 Kate

학생이 쓴 원문

If I was in dangerous situation, I would call to the police. Because police officers know about a lot of things as they are having a job about this kind of situation. And also they know that how can they deal with the situation, and also they were skilled. Because of these reasons, If my I was in dangerous situation, then I would call to the police first.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!
I agree with you. The police are always the best option in these situations. Anyway, let\'s always be careful so we won\'t need to call the police in the first place. Thanks for doing your task today. See you tomorrow! ^^
~~Teacher Kate 

If I was in dangerous situation, I would call to the police.
>>If I was in a dangerous situation, I would call the police.
Because police officers know about a lot of things as they are having a job about this kind of situation.
>>It\'s because police officers know about a lot of things as they are trained to handle this kind of situation.
And also they know that how can they deal with the situation, and also they were skilled.
>>They also know how they can deal with the situation and they are skilled. 
Because of these reasons, If my I was in dangerous situation, then I would call to the police first.
>>Because of these reasons, if I was in a dangerous situation, then I would call the police first.

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