If your life were a movie, what genre would it be?
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My life is not something special.
>>> correct!
I was growing up in poor environment, but I had a mother and farther. So, I did not feel I was unhappy.
>>> I grew up in a poor environment, but I had a mother and farther, so I did not feel unhappy.
When it comes to the time that I was teenagers, I was shy, introvert and I did not have self-confidence.
>>> When I was still a teenager, I was shy, introvert and I did not have self-confidence.
I had a problem to make a friend, so I used to stay at home all the time after school.
>>> I had a problem in making friends, so I used to stay at home all the time after school.
Someday, I had decided to change myself because I did not feel happy at that time.
>>> One day, I had decided to change myself because I did not feel happy at that time.
It was quite successful and I made a few friends.
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I have entered the university after graduating of high school.
>>> I have entered the university after graduating from high school.
It was memorable time in university because I was really enjoying the life in university and made a lot of friends. But one thing I did not do is attending the class and studying my major.
>>> It was a memorable time because I was really enjoying my life in the university, and made a lot of friends, but one thing I did not do was attending my class and studying my major.
I really appreciate that I have a regular job even though I didn\'t study hard when I was freshman.
>>> I really appreciate that I have a regular job even though I didn\'t study hard when I was a freshman.
Of course, I had been studying hard before I got a job and I think I did my best until now.
>>> Of course, I had been studying hard before I got a job and I did my best since then.
I don\'t think my life is special, so I would like to say that my life is a drama.
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