If your life were a movie, what genre would it be?

2018-11-06 · 첨삭 강사 Eunice

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My life is not something special. I was growing up in poor environment, but I had a mother and farther. So, I did not feel I was unhappy. When it comes to the time that I was teenagers, I was shy, introvert and I did not have self-confidence. I had a problem to make a friend, so I used to stay at home all the time after school. Someday, I had decided to change myself because I did not feel happy at that time. It was quite successful and I made a few friends. I have entered the university after graduating of high school. It was memorable time in university because I was really enjoying the life in university and made a lot of friends. But one thing I did not do is attending the class and studying my major. I really appreciate that I have a regular job even though I didn't study hard when I was freshman. Of course, I had been studying hard before I got a job and I think I did my best until now. I don't think my life is special, so I would like to say that my life is a drama

강사 첨삭

You supplied a spontaneous story, Sir [이름]!

Our life wouldn\'t be completed without ups and downs. This is wonderful, see you!

~Teacher Eunice


My life is not something special.

>>> correct!

I was growing up in poor environment, but I had a mother and farther. So, I did not feel I was unhappy.
>>>
I grew up in a poor environment, but I had a mother and farther, so I did not feel unhappy.

When it comes to the time that I was teenagers, I was shy, introvert and I did not have self-confidence.

>>> When I was still a teenager, I was shy, introvert and I did not have self-confidence.

I had a problem to make a friend, so I used to stay at home all the time after school.

>>> I had a problem in making friends, so I used to stay at home all the time after school. 

Someday, I had decided to change myself because I did not feel happy at that time.

>>> One day, I had decided to change myself because I did not feel happy at that time.

It was quite successful and I made a few friends.

>>> correct!

I have entered the university after graduating of high school. 

>>> I have entered the university after graduating from high school. 

It was memorable time in university because I was really enjoying the life in university and made a lot of friends. But one thing I did not do is attending the class and studying my major.

>>> It was a memorable time because I was really enjoying my life in the university, and made a lot of friends, but one thing I did not do was attending my class and studying my major. 

I really appreciate that I have a regular job even though I didn\'t study hard when I was freshman.

>>> I really appreciate that I have a regular job even though I didn\'t study hard when I was a freshman.

Of course, I had been studying hard before I got a job and I think I did my best until now.
>>> Of course, I had been studying hard before I got a job and I did my best since then.

I don\'t think my life is special, so I would like to say that my life is a drama.

>>> correct!

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