If your parents told you that you could have dessert for breakfast what would you eat?(ANSWER)

When my parents told me that I can have a dessert for breakfast, I could eat an apple. Because apple is delicious, sweet, and apple is good for our health. Apples are better that other snacks because they can be eaten in salads, pies, etc. And, I could eat milk and cereal.(Also they can be breakfast..) Because milk contains calcium and other nutrients. I think it is important to ingestion many nutrients at the morning. So, I think I could eat apples or milk and cereal. -END-

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HOMEWORK:

If your parents told you that you could have dessert for breakfast what would you eat?

Please answer in complete sentences.

 

YOUR ANSWER:

 

When my parents told me that I can have a dessert for breakfast, I could eat an apple.
Because apple is delicious, sweet, and apple is good for our health.
Apples are better that other snacks because they can be eaten in salads, pies, etc.
And, I could eat milk and cereal.(Also they can be breakfast..)
Because milk contains calcium and other nutrients.
I think it is important to ingestion many nutrients at the morning.
So, I think I could eat apples or milk and cereal.

           

CORRECTIONS:

 

When my parents told me that I could have dessert for breakfast, I could eat an apple.
Because apple is delicious, sweet, and apple is good for our health.
Apples are better that other snacks because they can be eaten in salads, pies, etc.
I could also eat milk and cereal. (They can be a breakfast, too.)
Milk contains calcium and other nutrients.
I think it is important to ingest many nutrients in the morning.
So, I think I could eat apples or milk and cereal.     

  

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