IFSR (Iran Finance Sanction Regulation)

2010-09-09 · 첨삭 강사 Shy

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Hello~there. (sorry, I don't kmow your name.) At first, sorry for my morning calling. i did a meeting when you call me. As you kmow, Korea issued a IFSR, yesterday. our company manufacture a heavy thickness pipe. We are the best one in KOREA in sort of this part. even if we also transfer to East Asia, America and EU, Iran's portion is biggest than other. So now we have a big problem in our BIZ. Tomorrow, comferemce ,In regard to IFSR, will open in Trading CENTER. anyway, I hope to solve the this problem well. umm..I want to kmow about you. Ok. see you next morning. Have a great day. Bye~~ (in korea, now raining...ㅜㅜ)

강사 첨삭

Hi there! Above are my corrections for you. Please be careful a little. Composition is quite difficult but I know you’ll do great if you always practice. ^^ >>Tina<<   Hello~there. (sorry, I don't kmow your name.) >>Hello there! (Sorry, but I don’t know your name.) At first, sorry for my morning calling. >>First, I would like to apologize for calling early in the morning. i did a meeting when you call me. >>I was having a meeting when you called me. As you kmow, Korea issued a IFSR, yesterday. >>As you know, Korea issued an IFSR yesterday. our company manufacture a heavy thickness pipe. >> Our company manufactures heavy thick pipes. We are the best one in KOREA in sort of this part. >> We are one of the best in KOREA in sort of this part. even if we also transfer to East Asia, America and EU, Iran's portion is biggest than other. >> Even if we transfer to East Asia, America and EU, Iran's portion is still the biggest from others. So now we have a big problem in our BIZ. >> So now, we are having a big problem in our business. Tomorrow, comferemce ,In regard to IFSR, will open in Trading CENTER. >> Tomorrow’s conference regarding IFSR will open in Trading CENTER. anyway, I hope to solve the this problem well. >> Anyway, I hope to solve the problem well. umm..I want to kmow about you. >> I want to know about you. Ok. see you next morning. >> Ok. See you in the morning. Have a great day. Bye~~ >> Have a great day. Bye! (in korea, now raining...ㅜㅜ) >>It is raining now in Korea.

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