Im not afraid
학생이 쓴 원문
I was lost because of my mom. She told me to go that way but that way wasn't right.ㅠㅠ so I finally find a new academy<afterschool> hew~~ I won't forge the ways that how to get there.Heeeeee~~
강사 첨삭
Oh good thing you were able to find the right way to your academy.
Bad Mommy!. tsk.tsk. hahaha. Just kidding.
Anyway, sometimes it's good to be lost..it's a way of having an adventure.hehehe
xoxo,
~Ella~
here are my corrections for you^^:
I was lost because of my mom.
>>CORRECT
She told me to go that way but that way wasn't right.ㅠㅠ
>>She told me to go that way but it wasn't right.
so I finally find a new academy<afterschool> hew~~
>>So I finally found the right way to my new academy (afterschool)
I won't forge the ways that how to get there.Heeeeee~~
>>I won't forget the right route on how to get there.
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