Im' on the fourth floor.

[이름]!

You are right! Women want to work nowadays.

They don\'t want to stay at home all day.

I think women are becoming more practical in terms of earning money.

We know that if both partners are working, it will help them to have more savings in the bank/

How about you? Do you want your wife to work or not?

We can discuss this in class. Talk to you soon.

Teacher Nina

Yes I think that the wife should manage the finance of home.

>> Yes, I think that the wife should manage the finances at home.

>> OR: Yes, I think that the wife should manage the budget at home.
Not have to be, but It is better when she manage it.

>> It doesn\'t mean that she have to, but it is better if she\'s the one in charge of it.
In my opinion, I tend to spend my money caring my substitutes.

>> In my case, I tend to spen my money caring for my subordinates/ younger ones.
It is essential to take care my squadron.

>> Correct

>> OR: It is important to take good care of my squadron.

However, that kind of expediture is becoming a wasting money After marriage.

>> Correct

Because all financial thing should be focus on household. I

>> Because all of the finances should be focused on the household.

In this perspective, It is more important that \'Who is well know about the specific situation of home finance\' not \'Who is the manager of home finance\'.

>> In this perspective, It is more important that \"Who is knowledgeable about the specific situation of the finances at home\" , not \'Who is the manager\".

It can be wife, also can be husband.

>> It can be the wife, it can also be the husband.

In Korean society, most wife didn\'t have occupation but not now.

>> In Korean society, most wives didn\'t have an occupation before, but it changed now.
Many women want to get a job and their counts are getting increased in these days.

>> Many women want to get a job and it is increasing these days.
So, It is not the fixed role of wives.

>> So, the role of wives is not fixed.

I\'m on the fourth floor that makes me spend lots of energy to get to here.

>> Correct
In weather like this, Sweat come out from my skin and It would be sticky when It dry.

>> In a weather like this, sweat comes out of my skin and it would be sticky when it dries.

My room consist of 2-floored-bed and two desks, chair and bath room.

>> My room consists of a double deck bed, two desks with chair and a bathroom.
Bath room is dirty like any other\'s

>> ( I think you didn\'t have enough space for your sentence. ^^)