Imagine a day in the life of a character who has the power to stop time. How would you use this powe

2024-08-26 · 첨삭 강사 Ryka

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If I have power to stop the time, I would use when I move to somewhere. then, I would have more time than others. It is very useful.

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Hi! I’m thrilled that you took the time to complete the homework. Your experiences and ideas were shared wonderfully—keep up the fantastic work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^


If I have power to stop the time, I would use when I move to somewhere. 
>>If I had the power to stop time, I would use it when moving somewhere. 

then, I would have more time than others.
>>As a result, I would gain more time than everyone else.

It is very useful.
>>It would be very useful.

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