Imagine that a big new department store is being built in your hometown. Do you support this develop
학생이 쓴 원문
I support the development that being built a big department in my town. Because there will be a convenient shopping facility soon.
강사 첨삭
1. I support the development that being built a big department in my town.
>>I support the building of a big department in my town.
2. Because there will be a convenient shopping facility soon.
>>Because, there will be a convenient shopping facility soon.
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I\'m sorry for answering your composition so late.
But, I\'m glad I\'m back.
I hope to talk to you again soon.
Hope you\'ve been fine for the past weeks.
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