Imagine the ways in which your country will change over the next five years. Talk about one way you

2017-05-08 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Personally, I think we do not need the bus drivers in the future. There are two reaosns to support my opinion. The first reason is that I have seen some subways that do not have drivers, so I believe bus also will be like that. The second reason is that it is beneficial. If there are not bus drivers, we can save money by using aoutomatic bus, so our bus's fee would be reduced. In conclusion, I guess the bus drivers will disappear for these reasons.

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Hi there, [이름]!

Thank you for sharing your idea about the change that will happen in your country. Let\'s also hope for more progress in the transportation system for the convenience of commuters.

~Kelly^^

Personally, I think we do not need the bus drivers in the future.

>> Personally, I think we do not need bus drivers in the future.

There are two reaosns to support my opinion. 

>> Correct.
The first reason is that I have seen some subways that do not have drivers, so I believe bus also will be like that.

>> The first reason is that I have seen some subways that do not have drivers, so I believe that it can also happen to buses.
The second reason is that it is beneficial.

>> Correct.

If there are not bus drivers, we can save money by using aoutomatic bus, so our bus\'s fee would be reduced.

>> If there are no bus drivers, we can save money by using automatic bus, so our bus fee would be reduced.
In conclusion, I guess the bus drivers will disappear for these reasons.

>> In conclusion, I guess bus drivers will no longer be needed for these reasons.

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