Imagine the ways in which your country will change over the next five years. Talk about one way you
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Hi there, [이름]!
Thank you for sharing your idea about the change that will happen in your country. Let\'s also hope for more progress in the transportation system for the convenience of commuters.
~Kelly^^
Personally, I think we do not need the bus drivers in the future.
>> Personally, I think we do not need bus drivers in the future.
There are two reaosns to support my opinion.
>> Correct.
The first reason is that I have seen some subways that do not have drivers, so I believe bus also will be like that.
>> The first reason is that I have seen some subways that do not have drivers, so I believe that it can also happen to buses.
The second reason is that it is beneficial.
>> Correct.
If there are not bus drivers, we can save money by using aoutomatic bus, so our bus\'s fee would be reduced.
>> If there are no bus drivers, we can save money by using automatic bus, so our bus fee would be reduced.
In conclusion, I guess the bus drivers will disappear for these reasons.
>> In conclusion, I guess bus drivers will no longer be needed for these reasons.
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