Imagine you are Santa Claus. What would your day be like?
학생이 쓴 원문
I\'m going to kids house because kids give gift and I\'m eating a Christmas cookie.
So Santa is busy job.
강사 첨삭
Here\'s your corrected composition, Jimmy. Please take a look at the corrections below.
Cheers,
Jean~~
Imagine you are Santa Claus. What would your day be like?
I\'m going to kids house because kids give gift and I\'m eating a Christmas cookie.
>>> I\'m going to the kids\' house because they gave me a gift, and I\'m eating a Christmas cookie. [I\'M UNCERTAIN IF THIS SENTENCE WAS WHAT YOU WANT TO SAY; IF NOT, BELOW IS ANOTHER CORRECTION]
>>> I\'m going to the kids\' house to give them a gift, and I\'m eating a Christmas cookie.
>>> OR: I’m heading to the kids’ house to drop off a gift, and I’m enjoying a Christmas cookie.
So Santa is busy job.
>>> Santa has a busy job.
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