Imagine you could live twice as long. How would you use your time?
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Happy hump day Sir [이름]!
If this could happen. I want to be with my family always.
I would spend more time with them.
And I would apply here at Power English earlier than the date I was hired.
Anyway, you are right. There are times that we take the moment, time given to us for granted.
It could depend on the situation. But we should always remember that we can\'t bring back time.
Talk to you soon.
Teacher Nina
It sounds wonderful.
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It couldn’t be better if we could live twice as long.
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It has been our all-time dream to live longer and there are still many researches that are underway to extend our life.
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Indeed, people’s life expectancy has significantly increased thanks to the advanced medical science, improved environments, and better nutrition.
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However, I don’t think that my life wouldn’t change a lot by the longevity.
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When we went to school, we prepared for a mid-term or a final exam and we were always pressed for time.
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We often thought that if we had more time, we could prepare for the exam perfectly.
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We often crammed for the exams and wanted have more time.
>> We often crammed for the exams and wanted to have more time.
However, when more time was given by any change like a postponed exam date, we used to spend time for other activities rather than studying.
>> However, when more time was given by any change like a postponed exam date, we used to spend our time for other activities rather than studying.
So, in the end, the result was the same regardless of how much time was additionally given.
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If you are a person who lives life to the fullest always, it would be a blessing to live twice.
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