Imagine you have arrived in a country where they don't speak your language. You have no money or fri

2015-02-16 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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What an embarrassing situation! If I have a credit card, I could withdraw some cash in advance from an ATM. Or if there is something that I can exchange for cash, I can sell it on the street. In order to communicate with them, I should use a body language which is an international means of communication when verbal languages are not applicable. If not, I have to sleep on the street or go to the subway station. If the weather is cold, it will be much tougher. I might have to consider begging for a penny. However, I might not have courage to do that. I should go to a restaurant or a motel and work as a part timer like doing the dishes or moping the floor and get some food and a shelter. Would they hire me even though I do not speak their local language? All such methods sound unrealistic. I think that the most feasible solution is to go to the Korean embassy to ask for help. They would at least help me make a phone call to my family in Korea and they can send me some money.

강사 첨삭

Hi there again Sir [이름]!
I appreciate your time for doing your homework.

Thank you so much.

The reason why I came up with this kind of question is that.

I heard that there are some people who take a risk to travel abroad to find a job.

Or there are people who experience this situation whenever they travel.

Thanks for sharing your ideas about this matter.

Teacher Nina


What an embarrassing situation!

>> correct

If I have a credit card, I could withdraw some cash in advance from an ATM.

>> correct

>> If I have a credit card, I could withdraw some cash in advance from an ATM machine.

Or if there is something that I can exchange for cash, I can sell it on the street.

>> correct 

In order to communicate with them, I should use a body language which is an international means of communication when verbal languages are not applicable.

>> correct

>> In order to communicate with the local people, I will use body language, which is an international means of communication.

If not, I have to sleep on the street or go to the subway station.

>> correct

If the weather is cold, it will be much tougher.

>> correct

>> If the weather is cold, it will be more difficult for me.

I might have to consider begging for a penny.

>> correct

However, I might not have courage to do that.

>> However, I might not have the courage to do that.

I should go to a restaurant or a motel and work as a part timer like doing the dishes or moping the floor and get some food and a shelter.

>> Did you mean: I should go to a restaurant or a motel and work as a part timer, like doing the dishes or moping the floor to have some food and shelter.

Would they hire me even though I do not speak their local language?

>> correct

>> Would they hire me even though I don\'t know how to speak in their local language?

All such methods sound unrealistic.

>> correct

I think that the most feasible solution is to go to the Korean embassy to ask for help.

>> correct

They would at least help me make a phone call to my family in Korea and they can send me some money.

>> correct

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