immigrant
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when I was in thirties, I\'d like to immigrate to Canada for my family life.
My husband and I had searches information and conditions for immigration.
We are not immigration to technical position but we had ph.D, so we could be well-educated immigrants.
But eventually we gave up because we didn\'t have enough monet for early settlement and we should support aging and poor parents.
My later years, I spend long vacation in the Mediterranean not immigrant.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Ms. [이름]!
Thank you for sharing this. I guess everyone dreams of migrating to another country for a better future. Were there any regrets on your part for not fulfilling this?
Talk to you later.
Aki~
when I was in thirties, I\'d like to immigrate to Canada for my family life.
>>> When I was in my thirties, I\'d like to immigrate to Canada for my family life.
My husband and I had searches information and conditions for immigration.
>>> My husband and I had searched for information and conditions for immigration.
We are not immigration to technical position but we had ph.D, so we could be well-educated immigrants.
>>> We are not immigrants to technical positions but we had ph.D, so we could be well-educated immigrants.
But eventually we gave up because we didn\'t have enough monet for early settlement and we should support aging and poor parents.
>>> But eventually, we gave up because we didn\'t have enough money for early settlement and we should support our aging and poor parents.
My later years, I spend long vacation in the Mediterranean not immigrant.
>>> In my later years, I spend long vacations in the Mediterranean not as an immigrant.
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