Immigration
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
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You did a good job here!^^ I will see you later in class.
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_T. Mayleen :)
I dislike winter that is frozen. so I love the country that is warm.
>>> I dislike winter so I prefer a country that is warm.
After retiring, I plan to immigrate to the country that is warm.
>>> After retiring, I plan to immigrate to a warm country.
From now on, I will prepare for immigration like language, money and culture etc.
>>> From now on, I will prepare for immigration by learning English, saving money, studying the culture of others, etc.
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