Importance of Family. ( Express your thoughts about the topic in not less than 3 sentences. )
학생이 쓴 원문
A family is a relative group mainly centered on a couple or family. It is very difficult to explain the importance of family.But I think it\'s important because my family always loves me.
강사 첨삭
Yes, maybe it is difficult to define but one thing is for sure they have a big impact on our lives. Thank you for your answer~
-Chammy
A family is a relative group mainly centered on a couple or family.
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It is very difficult to explain the importance of family.
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But I think it\'s important because my family always loves me.
>>Correct
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