Importance of family reunions
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
This is true, Ms. [이름]!
Family reunions make our relationship stronger with our relatives. Keep your ideas flowing, happy weekend!
~Teacher Eunice
A family reunions is like a small society.
>>> A family reunion is like a small society.
Because people of various ages can learn about different relationships.
>>> Correct!
There are more conflicts because family relationships are usually too close.
>>> Correct!
But we learn order of relations and become more mature by solving the conflict.
>>> But we learn from different relations and become more mature by solving the conflict.
We also get comfort and relaxation of the mind through time with close people.
>>> Correct!
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