importance of goal setting.

2021-09-04 · 첨삭 강사 Miya

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I think the goal makes people motivated and energetic. as for me, I feel bored and meaningless If I don\'t have a goal. so I like to set goals, even if it\'s a small thing for example \'eating healthy foods three times a week\' and whether it is achievable or not, setting a goal is interesting in itself. it reflects our interest or worries.

강사 첨삭

Good morning, Yu [이름]! 

Happy Saturday. :) 

Thank you for answering the homework question. :) I just have a few corrections to your answer. Please see the corrected version below: 

I think goals make people motivated and energetic. As for me, I feel bored and meaningless if I don\'t have a goal. So, I like to set goals, even if it\'s a small thing for example, eating healthy foods three times a week. Even though our goals are not always achievable, setting a goal is interesting in itself because it reflects our interests or worries. 

If you have any questions, don\'t hesitate to send me a message. 

Enjoy your weekend! 
Be safe always~

~Teacher Miya^^

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