important issues than poverty

2014-04-25 · 첨삭 강사 Chelsea

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I think the more important issue of poverty. The first is Love. this is because there are many selfish people. and the biggest problem with the poverty. thank you for always.

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Hi there^^ Thank you for doing your homework^^ I made some corrections and I hope that I was able to meet your points. If you have some questions, just feel free to ask me in our class! See you on Monday! Have a great day and take care^^ ~T.Chelsea I think the more important issue of poverty. The first is Love. this is because there are many selfish people. and the biggest problem with the poverty. thank you for always. >> Do you mean, \"I thnk poverty is more important issue than love because there are many selfish people and that id the biggest problem in poverty. Thank you for always helping.

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