Important items

2018-08-13 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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My important items are wallet and phone. If it happened emergency, I can take a texi and make a phone call to someone who can help me. Plus, when I waited for friends, I can see the Instagram for fun. And when I found the thing which I want, I can buy it to my money. So these are important for me!!!!!!!!!!

강사 첨삭

Hi Ssun!

I think we have the same opinion.

You have expressed yourself well.

Keep it up!

~~ Teacher Sharon

My important items are wallet and phone.

>> My most important possessions are my wallet and my phone.
If it happened emergency, I can take a texi and make a phone call to someone who can help me.

>> If there is an emergency, I can take a taxi and make a phone call to someone who can help me.
 Plus, when I waited for friends, I can see the Instagram for fun.

>> I can also have fun with my Instagram whenever I wait for friends.
 And when I found the thing which I want, I can buy it to my money.

>> When I find something I like, I can use my money to buy it.
 So these are important for me!!!!!!!!!!

>> That is why these things are important to me.

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