Important items
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Ssun!
I think we have the same opinion.
You have expressed yourself well.
Keep it up!
~~ Teacher Sharon
My important items are wallet and phone.
>> My most important possessions are my wallet and my phone.
If it happened emergency, I can take a texi and make a phone call to someone who can help me.
>> If there is an emergency, I can take a taxi and make a phone call to someone who can help me.
Plus, when I waited for friends, I can see the Instagram for fun.
>> I can also have fun with my Instagram whenever I wait for friends.
And when I found the thing which I want, I can buy it to my money.
>> When I find something I like, I can use my money to buy it.
So these are important for me!!!!!!!!!!
>> That is why these things are important to me.
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