important letter!!

2014-07-16 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi ~ It's me, Carolyn. Today, [이름]'s phone is out. So if you see this letter befoer you have to call to his phone. Can you call to my phone? My phone number is [휴대전화] Please :-( Read my letter !!

강사 첨삭

Hello Carolyn! Of course, I will call you. ^^ Thanks for your letter. I admire you for informing me before our class. I hope that you are having a great day. Talk to you very soon.Teacher Nina   Hi ~ It\'s me, Carolyn.>> Correct Today, [이름]\'s phone is out. >> Did you mean: [이름]\'s phone is not working. >> OR: [이름]\'s phone is broken.So if you see this letter befoer you have to call to his phone. >> So, if you see this letter before you call him.Can you call to my phone? >> Please call me. >> OR: Can you please call on my mobile phone instead. My phone number is [휴대전화] >> Correct >> OR: My mobile number is [휴대전화] Please :-( Read my letter !! >> Correct

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