important letter!!
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi ~ It's me, Carolyn.
Today, [이름]'s phone is out.
So if you see this letter befoer you have to call to his phone.
Can you call to my phone?
My phone number is
[휴대전화]
Please :-( Read my letter !!
강사 첨삭
Hello Carolyn!
Of course, I will call you. ^^
Thanks for your letter.
I admire you for informing me before our class.
I hope that you are having a great day.
Talk to you very soon.Teacher Nina
Hi ~ It\'s me, Carolyn.>> Correct
Today, [이름]\'s phone is out.
>> Did you mean: [이름]\'s phone is not working.
>> OR: [이름]\'s phone is broken.So if you see this letter befoer you have to call to his phone.
>> So, if you see this letter before you call him.Can you call to my phone?
>> Please call me.
>> OR: Can you please call on my mobile phone instead. My phone number is [휴대전화]
>> Correct
>> OR: My mobile number is [휴대전화]
Please :-( Read my letter !!
>> Correct
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