Important skill.

2013-06-07 · 첨삭 강사 Giselle

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I think it is important to improve skill of languages. In my opinion, communication is a fitst step of every work. If I want to learn something, first I have to learn languages. Because I need to understand my teacher's saying or lesson of class. Or if I am business woman, I have to learn languages first. Because I need to know about this contract. But we can't learn every language. We have a limit. So we first learn English. English is a common language. If we can communite in English, we start half of work at least. Then, we should study other languages.

강사 첨삭

Happy Friday [이름]! Thank you for writing an impressive composition. Language skills are indeed important nowadays since people are becoming globally competitive. I hope that you will not stop learning just one language. Be motivated to learn more! See you later! ~ T. Giselle^^   I think it is important to improve skill of languages.>> I think it is important to improve my language skills.In my opinion, communication is a fitst step of every work.>> In my opinion, communication is the first step in every work.If I want to learn something, first I have to learn languages. >> Correct!Because I need to understand my teacher\'s saying or lesson of class.>> Because I need to understand what my teacher is saying or the lesson in class.Or if I am business woman, I have to learn languages first. Because I need to know about this contract. >> If I am also a bussinesswoman, I have to learn different languages first because I need it to understand contracts.But we can\'t learn every language. >> But we can\'t learn every language. We have a limit. >> Correct.So we first learn English.>> So we must learn English first.English is a common language. >> English is the common language between nations.If we can communite in English, we start half of work at least.>> If we can communicate in English, we can at least start finishing half of the work.Then, we should study other languages. >> Then we can continue studying other languages.

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