Important vs Not Important
학생이 쓴 원문
Theme: Is it important to teach kids at school how to dance? Why?
I think It\\\'s good but not so important.
Children have the right to learn dancing at school.
Because dancing is popular and we can learn it easy.
Why don\\\'t we teach dancing while we can teach it easy?
I think teaching dancing at school is important!
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Clair!
As always, thanks for the prompt sending of your homework!
Cheers,
Jean~~
Theme: Is it important to teach kids at school how to dance? Why?
I think It\'s good but not so important.
>> correct
>> or: I believe it\'s a good thing but not essential.
Children have the right to learn dancing at school. Because dancing is popular and we can learn it easy.
>> Children have the right to learn dancing at school because this activity is popular and we can learn it easily.
Why don\\\'t we teach dancing while we can teach it easy?
>> So why don\'t we teach dancing while we can teach it easily?
I think teaching dancing at school is important!
>> correct
>> or: I personally think that teaching dancing at school is important.
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