Important walking.

2020-07-01 · 첨삭 강사 Gabby

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello, Gabby. It\'s windy whole day today here. Our pets scare it. They sit on my knee or looking for in the corner. I\'m afraid of it too. How was the weather there today? What did you do today? I cooked Kimchi stew for lunch and Chicken soup for dinner. My cooking success. My family said it\'s delicious. By the way, I walk every day for my health. I write here a personal thought. Walking is making physical organs healthily. The exercise is walking. I\'m just great by walk. See you tomorrow Gabby.

강사 첨삭

Hi Suzan. Keep improving every day. :)

-T. Gabby :)

Hello, Gabby.
>> Correct.
It\'s windy whole day today here. Our pets scare it.

>> It\'s windy today and our pets are scared.
They sit on my knee or looking for in the corner. I\'m afraid of it too.

>> They sat on my knee and looked for a corner to hide. I feel afraid too.
How was the weather there today?

>> Correct.
What did you do today?

>> Correct.
I cooked Kimchi stew for lunch and Chicken soup for dinner.

>> Correct.
My cooking success. My family said it\'s delicious.

>> My family said that the sauce I made is delicious.
By the way, I walk every day for my health.

>> By the way, I walk every day for to be healthy.

I write here a personal thought.

>> I write my personal thoughts here.
Walking is making physical organs healthily.

>> Walking makes my organs healthy.
The exercise is walking. I\'m just great by walk.

>> My exercise is walking and I\'m great at walking.
See you tomorrow Gabby.

>> Correct.

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