Impossible is nothing!
학생이 쓴 원문
There are a lot of troubles in the world. Similar to, there are plenty of products and results also. The ability of humans is great. But most of people worry about their capabilities.
I was worried about my ability too much. The reason is that I be embarrassed and worried a lot. When I had something to do : exam, presentation, open class. I didn't know what to do; the fear made me have non-confidence.
When the time to came to perform, everything was well done.
Finally I decided to change my mind positively and I thought that there is no impossible. The fear had disappered out of my sight.
If you want to do hard work, don't hesitate about it. Think positively and challenge everything because there is no impossible.
강사 첨삭
[이름],
I like this article. Well, you are right. We sometimes focus too much on the troubles we are encountering. We are most of the time hindered by our fears and anxiety of the unknown. We see problems but take the solutions for granted. If we only open our eyes and change our view on things, say, be more positive, we will be able to see that there are a lot of solutions everywhere. Even I become pessimistic most of the time. But, you are right. Nothing is impossible! ^^
Thanks for this composition!
XOXO,
Jenifer
Here are the corrections:
There are a lot of troubles in the world.
>> Correct.
Similar to, there are plenty of products and results also.
>>Similarly, there are plenty of solutions and results as well.
The ability of humans is great. But most of people worry about their capabilities.
>>The capability of humans is great but most people worry about them.I was worried about my ability too much.
>> I was too much worried of my abilities.
The reason is that I be embarrassed and worried a lot.
>> I feel embarrassed and anxious.
When I had something to do : exam, presentation, open class. I didn't know what to do; the fear made me have non-confidence.
>> When there’s something I have to do: exams, presentations, open forums, etc., I become so unsure and those fears make me non-confident.When the time to came to perform, everything was well done.
>> I always end up doing well in the performance.Finally I decided to change my mind positively and I thought that there is no impossible.
>> Finally, I decided to change my point of view and become more positive. I thought nothing is impossible.
The fear had disappered out of my sight.
>> All my fears disappeared.If you want to do hard work, don't hesitate about it.
>>If you want to work hard, don’t hesitate.
Think positively and challenge everything because there is no impossible.
>> Think positively and challenge everything because nothing is impossible.
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