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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Mi Ri!
Thank you so much for submitting your composition. I am glad that you are having fun and you feel happy in learning new languages. I hope that you keep learning more and have more enjoyment. I hope that you\'ll have a great day ahead!
~Teacher Gina
I want to conversation with native in English and Japanese. And i study English with teacher Gina. Study Japanes with teacher Nobuka. It is happiness to me.
>> I want to have conversations with native English and Japanese speakers. I study English with teacher Gina while I study Japanese with teacher Nobuka. Learning these languages and having conversations with them is happiness to me.
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