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2020-05-04 · 첨삭 강사 Jasper

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Language is really important in expressing and understanding one`s feelings and thoughts. If I can nor hear and speak, I get embarrassed and frustrated. I can not speak another language perfectly. It`s essential for smooth communication between each other. Sometimes people who speak the same Korean can`t communicate.

강사 첨삭

Hi Mrs. [Name]! Happy Monday! Thank you for doing your homework. Keep it up. See you later this afternoon. Have a great day~
T. Jasper

Here are your corrections:

Language is really important in expressing and understanding one`s feelings and thoughts.

>> CORRECT

If I can nor hear and speak, I get embarrassed and frustrated.

>> If I can\'t hear nor speak, I get embarrassed and frustrated.

I can not speak another language perfectly.

>> CORRECT

It`s essential for smooth communication between each other.

>> It\'s essential for a smooth communication between one another.

Sometimes people who speak the same Korean can`t communicate.

>> Sometimes people who speak Korean can\'t communicate properly.

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