impulsive purchase

2021-01-28 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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I\'ve never bought anything impulsively. First I think about what I need. And again I think one more whether I really need it. And then I decide to buy it. When I remember, there is nothing I buy and not use it. It is a little ridiculous but I don\'t like \'buying one and getting one for free\'. Because one of them can\'t use at the right time.

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름] Ha. Thank you for doing the homework. I appreciate the effort you put into it. Good work!^^ I am impressed with your shopping principles. I hope you are having a good evening. See you again next time. ~Teacher Jane c\",)


I\'ve never bought anything impulsively.
>> CORRECT =)

First I think about what I need.
>> CORRECT =)

And again I think one more whether I really need it.
>>  And again I think one more whether I really need it or not.

And then I decide to buy it.
>> CORRECT =)

When I remember, there is nothing I buy and not use it.
>> I do not remember buying something and not using it.

It is a little ridiculous but I don\'t like \'buying one and getting one for free\'.
>> CORRECT =)

Because one of them can\'t use at the right time.
>> Because I cannot use one of them at the right time.

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