Impulsive shopping experience

2023-08-18 · 첨삭 강사 Jade

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Have you ever had an impulsive shopping experience where you bought something unexpectedly? What did you feel afterward? Originally, I have a shopping habit of thinking carefully and comparing to these and those. But I had an impulsive shopping experience where I bought something unexpectedly. I felt two different emotions from my experience. I bought cosmetics on impulse because it looks good. It was pretty and used well. So I thought it was good thing that I bought it. However, when I bought for my best friend\'s birthday present, I bought a cute little interior accessorys on impulse, but I didn\'t have space to put them and didn\'t need it. So I had a very embarrassing.

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~ T. Jade ^^
Have you ever had an impulsive shopping experience where you bought something unexpectedly? What did you feel afterward?
Originally, I have a shopping habit of thinking carefully and comparing to these and those.
>> Originally, I have a shopping habit of thinking carefully and comparing these and those.
But I had an impulsive shopping experience where I bought something unexpectedly.
>> Correct
I felt two different emotions from my experience.
>> Correct
I bought cosmetics on impulse because it looks good. 
>> I bought cosmetics on impulse because they looked good.
It was pretty and used well. 
>> Correct
>> OR: It was pretty and served its purpose well.
So I thought it was good thing that I bought it.
>> Correct
However, when I bought for my best friend\'s birthday present, I bought a cute little interior accessorys on impulse, but I didn\'t have space to put them and didn\'t need it.
>> However, when I bought a birthday present for my best friend, I bought cute little interior accessories on impulse, but I didn\'t have space to put them and didn\'t need them.
>> OR: However, when I bought a birthday present for my best friend, I impulsively purchased cute little interior accessories, but I didn\'t have space to put them and didn\'t need them.
So I had a very embarrassing.
>> So I had a very embarrassing moment.
>> So I was very embarrassed.

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