In 100 years from now, how different do you think the natural world will be?
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In 100 years from now, how different do you think the natural world will be?
It will be distroyed the natrual world than now, beacuse Human is developing a new procduct for the convienent life.
All product can\'t be made environmentally friendly.
Destruction of natural world by human, people will develop the artificial natural.
We are trying to protect the environment pollution, for exampe, using a tumbler instead of a paper cup.
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Hi [이름]! I feel the same way. Human kind are doing so many things that actually harm our world. Let\'s just hope that it will not prolong.
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I think the natural world will be destroyed. It will be distroyed the natrual world than now, beacuse Human is developing a new procduct for the convienent life.
All product can\'t be made environmentally friendly.
Destruction of natural world by human, people will develop the artificial natural.
We are trying to protect the environment pollution, for exampe, using a tumbler instead of a paper
>> In 100 years from now, the natural world be destroyed because humans are developing new products to make life more convenient which actually harms nature.
All product can\'t be made environmentally friendly.
>> Not all products can be made environment friendly.
Destruction of natural world by human, people will develop the artificial natural.
>> When the natural world is already destroyed by humans, people will develop artificial nature.
We are trying to protect the environment pollution, for exampe, using a tumbler instead of a paper
>> We need to protect our environment from pollution like using reusable things.
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