In 3-5 sentences, describe the most interesting weekend that you experienced.

2018-05-28 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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The most interesting weekend I've ever had was the one I had run to 3 exhibition places. I had to do some research on exhibitions for my work, and I had very limited time. So I was worried at first, but when I got to the exhibition hall, all the exhibition was fascinating which even made my worry not important one at all. Because the exhibition was gorgeous, and I could get important summaries from the first glance.

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^

Thank you for sending your homework.

Cheers!
Jean~~

The most interesting weekend I\'ve ever had was the one I had run to 3 exhibition places.

>> The most interesting weekend I\'ve ever had was when I had to run or manage three exhibitions with different locations.

I had to do some research on exhibitions for my work, and I had very limited time.

>>OR: I had to do some research on exhibitions for work under very limited time.

So I was worried at first, but when I got to the exhibition hall, all the exhibition was fascinating which even made my worry not important one at all.

>> So I was worried at first, but when I got to the exhibition hall, all the exhibitions were fascinating which even made my worries irrelevant.

Because the exhibition was gorgeous, and I could get important summaries from the first glance.

>> This is because the exhibition looked very grand, and I could get relevant information at first glance.

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