In 5-8 sentences, discuss the advantages and disadvantages of a working student.

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There are some reasones regarding the adcanteages of a working student. Firstly, they can get their independent mind and self- reliance. 

>>> There are some reasons regarding the advantages of a working student. Firstly, they can get their independent mind and self- reliance. 

They earn money themselves and live using the money.

>>> They earned the money themselves and live suing the money

 Normally, some student are given some money by their parents.

>>> Normally, some student is given some money by their parents.

So we have some limits to spend the money. Also, a working student can have various experiences in advance by working lots of jobs.

>>> CORRECT
In the other hands, they can not have their own time to think about what i want to be, what i want to do.

>>> In the other hands, they can not have their own time to think about what I want to be, what I want to do. 

 It means that they do not have time for themselves.

>>> CORRECT

 In addition, it is easy to feel tired and they have no spare time. 

>>> In addition, it\'s easy for them to be tired and they don\'t have spare time. 

That\'s because they have to keep working except for studying time.

>>> CORRECT