In 5 sentences, please write your expectations from the class and from the teacher.
학생이 쓴 원문
First of all, I would like to improve my speaking skill a lot as possible as I can. That\'s why I chose this course,
I hope to get lots of vocabulary from reading and talking about current affairs and I make myself understood in English to communicate anytime and anywhere.
Secondly, I hope to improve my listening skills, so I\'d like to get the exact point that English speakers try to address.
Thirdly, I expect that you listen to me and correct me whenever I make errors in class. Some teachers talked more than me in class, so I spent the class listening to the teachers. I am like a teacher, not a student. I think they also try to help me with English, but I would like to talk a lot in class.
Last but not least, I t is a good time to take this course, I look forward to improving my English skills.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ms. [이름].
These are all acknowledged.
Thank you for your composition.
Please take note of the suggestions below.
If you have any questions, feel free to ask during the class.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
First of all, I would like to improve my speaking skill a lot as possible as I can.
>> First of all, I would like to improve my speaking skills as much as possible.
That\'s why I chose this course,
>> That\'s why I chose this course.
I hope to get lots of vocabulary from reading and talking about current affairs and I make myself understood in English to communicate anytime and anywhere.
I hope to get lots of vocabulary from reading and talking about current affairs and I make myself understood in English to communicate anytime and anywhere.
>> I hope to get lots of vocabulary from reading and talking about current affairs and make myself understood in English to communicate anytime and anywhere.
Secondly, I hope to improve my listening skills, so I\'d like to get the exact point that English speakers try to address.
Secondly, I hope to improve my listening skills, so I\'d like to get the exact point that English speakers try to address.
>> Correct
Thirdly, I expect that you listen to me and correct me whenever I make errors in class.
Thirdly, I expect that you listen to me and correct me whenever I make errors in class.
>> Correct
Some teachers talked more than me in class, so I spent the class listening to the teachers.
>> Correct
I am like a teacher, not a student.
>> Correct
I think they also try to help me with English, but I would like to talk a lot in class.
>> I think they also tried to help me with English, but I would like to talk a lot in class.
Last but not least, I t is a good time to take this course,
Last but not least, I t is a good time to take this course,
>> Last but not least, it is a good time to take this course.
I look forward to improving my English skills.
>> Correct
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