In 5 sentences, please write your expectations from the class and from the teacher.
학생이 쓴 원문
I have 2 objectives from the class.
First, i would like to improve my speaking skills and want to speak long and elaborative sentences fluently.
Second, i would like to prepare for an English job interview which will be held in about 1-2 months.
Moreover, i want to speak logically about the debate subject rather than repeating easy and daily conversations.
I am eager to learn speaking English and try to study hard with you. Thank you, very much.
강사 첨삭
Hi Serena!
Take note of the suggestions below.
I checked everything including grammar, prepositions, punctuation and capitalization.
If you have any questions, feel free to ask during the class.
I hope you can be consistent in your practice.
Great job!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I have 2 objectives from the class.
>> I have two objectives for this class.
First, i would like to improve my speaking skills and want to speak long and elaborative sentences fluently.
First, i would like to improve my speaking skills and want to speak long and elaborative sentences fluently.
>> First, I would like to improve my speaking skills and be able to speak in longer and more elaborate sentences fluently.
Second, i would like to prepare for an English job interview which will be held in about 1-2 months.
Second, i would like to prepare for an English job interview which will be held in about 1-2 months.
>> Second, I would like to prepare for an English job interview that will be held in about one to two months.
Moreover, i want to speak logically about the debate subject rather than repeating easy and daily conversations.
Moreover, i want to speak logically about the debate subject rather than repeating easy and daily conversations.
>> Moreover, I want to speak more logically about debate topics rather than repeating simple and daily conversations.
I am eager to learn speaking English and try to study hard with you.
I am eager to learn speaking English and try to study hard with you.
>> I am eager to improve my English speaking skills and I will try to study hard with you.
Thank you, very much.
>> Thank you very much.
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