In 5 sentences, please write your expectations from the class and from the teacher.

2020-02-11 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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I wish I can speak like a professional person. So if I use childish word or low level English, I want my teacher to lead me to speak more elegant way. Also, I am looking for a job in a global company, so I have to prepare for my English job interview. So in our free-talking time, I would like to practice answering some questions which might come out in the job interview. I would be happy to hear short comments about my answer too :) Thank you!

강사 첨삭

Hi J!
I\'m really impressed with your speaking and writing skills.
You need polishing and introduction of new terms.
I think you are up to the challenge.
I\'m rooting for you.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I wish I can speak like a professional person.
>> Correct
So if I use childish word or low level English, I want my teacher to lead me to speak more elegant way.
>> That\'s why I would like my teacher to lead me away from childish terms into business and sophisticated expressions.
Also, I am looking for a job in a global company, so I have to prepare for my English job interview.
>> I am also looking for a job in a global company, so I have to prepare for my English job interview.
So in our free-talking time, I would like to practice answering some questions which might come out in the job interview.
>> So in our free talking time, I would like to practice answering some questions which might come out in the job interview.
I would be happy to hear short comments about my answer too.
>> Correct

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