In 7 sentences. Tell me about your hometown.

2018-06-07 · 첨삭 강사 Gray

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Hi~ teacher Gray I did not know that there are english homework.ㅋㅋ I am also slow type in the alphabet but I will do my best. I was born in Seoul. Seoul is capital of South of Korea. Seoul has a small area and a large population. So There are many tall buildings and apartments like HONG KONG. Seoul is very clean city. Now our counry devided North KOrea and South korea. I hope our country will be unified.

강사 첨삭

I did not know that there are english homework.ㅋㅋ

>> I did not know that there will be English homework.


I am also slow type in the alphabet

>> I am also slow in typing using English alphabets.


 but I will do my best.

>> CORRECT

 I was born in Seoul.

>> CORRECT


 Seoul is capital of South of Korea.

>> Seoul is the capital of South Korea.


 Seoul has a small area and a large population.

>> Seoul has a small area. But, it has a large population.


 So There are many tall buildings and apartments like HONG KONG.

>> So, there are a lot of tall buildings and apartments like in Hong Kong.


 Seoul is very clean city.

>> Seoul is a very clean city.


 Now our counry devided North KOrea and South korea.

>> Our country is currently divided into two. Such as North and South Korea.


 I hope our country will be unified.

>> CORRECT.


Good job on your homework! kkkk ^^ I really want to live in Seoul >___< kkk


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