In 7 sentences. Tell me about your hometown.
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I did not know that there are english homework.ㅋㅋ
>> I did not know that there will be English homework.
I am also slow type in the alphabet
>> I am also slow in typing using English alphabets.
but I will do my best.
>> CORRECT
I was born in Seoul.
>> CORRECT
Seoul is capital of South of Korea.
>> Seoul is the capital of South Korea.
Seoul has a small area and a large population.
>> Seoul has a small area. But, it has a large population.
So There are many tall buildings and apartments like HONG KONG.
>> So, there are a lot of tall buildings and apartments like in Hong Kong.
Seoul is very clean city.
>> Seoul is a very clean city.
Now our counry devided North KOrea and South korea.
>> Our country is currently divided into two. Such as North and South Korea.
I hope our country will be unified.
>> CORRECT.
Good job on your homework! kkkk ^^ I really want to live in Seoul >___< kkk
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