in a city or in the countryside?

2010-03-15 · 첨삭 강사 abby

학생이 쓴 원문

I would prefer to teach English in a city because I was born and raised in a city.To be honest,I want to teach at my alma mater where I did teacher training and I would be so happy and honored to be a real teacher in my old school.I would also to live in a city because I spent the most time of my university life to study prepareing this test so I enjoy having a lot of things to do in my free time.I also think I can meet more many capable teachers at a school in a city and I need to learn a lot of things from them and develop my own special activities.That's not to say I wouldn't teach in the country forever.After I become a experienced teacher,I would like to teach English in the coustryside where has poor education system and let my students have good qualities of Englsih class.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름], Thank you for your time writing here again. Here are some revisions. I would prefer to teach English in a city because I was born and raised in a city. >>> Correct To be honest,I want to teach at my alma mater where I did teacher training and I would be so happy and honored to be a real teacher in my old school >>>Correct I would also to live in a city because I spent the most time of my university life to study prepareing this test so I enjoy having a lot of things to do in my free time. >>>I would also like to live in a (or the) city because I spent the most time of my university life to study preparing this test so I enjoy having a lot of things to do in my free time. I also think I can meet more many capable teachers at a school in a city and I need to learn a lot of things from them and develop my own special activities.That's not to say I wouldn't teach in the country forever. >>> Correct After I become a experienced teacher,I would like to teach English in the coustryside where has poor education system and let my students have good qualities of Englsih class >>> After I become an experienced teacher,I would like to teach English in the coustryside where there is poor education system and I want to let my students have good quality  Englsih classes.

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