In a devastating situation
학생이 쓴 원문
When a person faces on a devastating situation, a real value of him appears on the surface. Someone always looks back to his negative emotions, however another looks forward in keen insight into current situation. Tiger never yeilds out and to be in pain when it fails to hunt. As soon, He comes down his breath and starts to chase a missing prey calmly. Because He knows that he becomes a winner finally. A person to be in negetive emotions is a prey, a person to be in realistic vision is a tiger.
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When a person faces on a devastating situation, a real value of him appears on the surface.
>>When a person faces a devastating situation, a real value of him appears on the surface.
Someone always looks back to his negative emotions, however another looks forward in keen insight into current situation.
>>Someone always looks back to his negative emotions, however another person looks forward with keen insight into the current situation.
Tiger never yeilds out and to be in pain when it fails to hunt.
>>The tiger never yields out to be in pain when it fails to hunt.
As soon, He comes down his breath and starts to chase a missing prey calmly.Because He knows that he becomes a winner finally.
>>As soon as he comes down to his breath and starts to chase a missing prey calmly that's the time he becomes a winner finally.
A person to be in negetive emotions is a prey, a person to be in realistic vision is a tiger.
>> A person to be in negative emotions is a prey, a person to be in realistic vision is a tiger.
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