In between love and friendship(1)

2010-03-05 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

학생이 쓴 원문

When I was high s[이름]ol student, I had a rear malefriend. At that time, Even if I was alone and spent hard time during tha third year in high s[이름]ol, I was quite happy to study with him. Over time, we became close friends. I didn't have enough confidence to live without him. Neither did he. In that way, we reached the age of 20 together. But our relationship couldn't be connected for a long time. Because I was unsuccessful in entering the university. For 1 year, we had to seperate for each life. Thereafter, I studied an entrance examination again.

강사 첨삭

This is a very interesting story.. "Love and Friendship" might be a very good title. Oftentimes, we only realize what's important to us when it's gone. However, this kind of experience also makes us stronger and a better person. Here are the corrections..   When I was high s[이름]ol student, I had a rear malefriend. >>>When I was a high s[이름]ol student, I had a male best friend. At that time, Even if I was alone and spent hard time during tha thirdyear in high s[이름]ol, I was quite happy to study with him. >>>I was in my third year then, spending a hard time alone. So I was quite happy studying with him. Over time, we became close friends. >>>As time goes by, we became close friends. I didn't have enough confidence to live without him. Neither did he. >>>This is correct. In that way, we reached the age of 20 together. >>>We were together until we were 20. But our relationship couldn't be connected for a long time.Because I was unsuccessful in entering the university. >>>But we couldn't be together when I failed the entrance examination in the university. For 1 year, we had to seperate for each life. >>>We separated for one year. Thereafter, I studied an entrance examination again. >>>Then I took the entrance examination again.

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