In between love and friendship(2)

2010-03-05 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

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When I was 21 years old, We met by chance and started to connet with each other, Because his university was near by my s[이름]ol. We usually came and went together. But, He took the military survice notifycatoin and had to enlist in the army. I was desperately in love with him. At that time, When he made a confession, I decided to associate with him. This day was dated May.5. It was an our first date. our friendship changed deep love without knowing it. But I couldn't understand how to change my mind easily. He was a perfect my rear friend. I couldn't receive this situation pwing to old friendship. Anyway, finally, we met evry day for 2 years.

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When I was 21 years old, We met by chance and started to connet with each other, Because his university was near by my s[이름]ol. >>>When I was 21, we met by chance since my s[이름]ol was close to his. We started to be with each other again. We usually came and went together. >>>We usually go out together. But, He took the military survice notifycatoin and had to enlist in the army. >>>However, it was time for him to take the military service. I was desperately in love with him. >>>This sentence is correct. At that time, When he made a confession, I decided to associate with him. This day was dated May.5. It was an our first date. >>>It was May 5 when we had our first date. He made a confession so I decided to be in touch with him. our friendship changed deep love without knowing it. >>>We didn't notice that our friendship has grown deeper. But I couldn't understand how to change my mind easily. >>>And my mind couldn't easily take it. He was a perfect my rear friend. I couldn't receive this situation pwing to old friendship. >>>He was a perfect best friend. I couldn't accept this new relationship that we have. Anyway, finally, we met evry day for 2 years. >>>But anyway, we were together for two years.  

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