In between love and friendship(2)
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When I was 21 years old, We met by chance and started to connet with each other, Because his university was near by my s[이름]ol.
We usually came and went together. But, He took the military survice notifycatoin and had to enlist in the army. I was desperately in love with him. At that time, When he made a confession, I decided to associate with him. This day was dated May.5. It was an our first date. our friendship changed deep love without knowing it.
But I couldn't understand how to change my mind easily.
He was a perfect my rear friend. I couldn't receive this situation pwing to old friendship. Anyway, finally, we met evry day for 2 years.
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When I was 21 years old, We met by chance and started to connet with each other, Because his university was near by my s[이름]ol.
>>>When I was 21, we met by chance since my s[이름]ol was close to his. We started to be with each other again.
We usually came and went together.
>>>We usually go out together.
But, He took the military survice notifycatoin and had to enlist in the army.
>>>However, it was time for him to take the military service.
I was desperately in love with him.
>>>This sentence is correct.
At that time, When he made a confession, I decided to associate with him. This day was dated May.5. It was an our first date.
>>>It was May 5 when we had our first date. He made a confession so I decided to be in touch with him.
our friendship changed deep love without knowing it.
>>>We didn't notice that our friendship has grown deeper.
But I couldn't understand how to change my mind easily.
>>>And my mind couldn't easily take it.
He was a perfect my rear friend. I couldn't receive this situation pwing to old friendship.
>>>He was a perfect best friend. I couldn't accept this new relationship that we have.
Anyway, finally, we met evry day for 2 years.
>>>But anyway, we were together for two years.
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