In between love and friendship(3)

2010-03-05 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

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Other friends were envious of us. I thought that we mathed well with each other. But this time, we have to part from each other. I don't know why do I tell him about this. I regret to have done such a thing, but what can I do? I feel awfully sorry for what I have done. I throw my love and friendship away like an old shoe at all.

강사 첨삭

Other friends were envious of us. >>>Our friends were envious of us. I thought that we mathed well with each other. >>>I thought that we were perfect for each other. But this time, we have to part from each other. >>>But this time, we have to part.I don't know why do I tell him about this >>>I don't know why I tell him about this.I regret to have done such a thing, but what can I do? I feel awfully sorry for what I have done. >>>These are correct.I throw my love and friendship away like an old shoe at all. >>>I've thrown my love and friendship away just like an old shoe.

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