In church
학생이 쓴 원문
After my serveice on Sunday, a foreingner asked me somthing pointing our computer. "Can I use blabla~?" At first, I thought he wanted to use our computer, so I said " I'm not sure if you can use it, I'll check it out".But after some time, I noticed he wanted to use just power. I answered " Of course. you can use it". Other people who were with me said, " Wow! you are good at speaking English" I was so flattered. It was just a sentence. ^^
강사 첨삭
Hi there Jee Eun,
Wow! I'm so proud of you. You had courage to talk to that man. Aja! As I told you in the class you need to grab the opportunity to learn English while talking to a foreigner. I believe in you! Enjoy!
-Verna-
After my serveice on Sunday, a foreingner asked me somthing pointing our computer.
>> After my service on Sunday, a foreigner asked me something pointing our computer.
"Can I use blabla~?" At first, I thought he wanted to use our computer, so I said " I'm not sure if you can use it, I'll check it out".
>>Correct
But after some time, I noticed he wanted to use just power. I answered " Of course. you can use it".
>>But after sometime, I noticed he just wanted to charge his laptop. I answered " Of course, you can use it".
Other people who were with me said, " Wow! you are good at speaking English" I was so flattered.
>> Other people who were with me said, wow! You are good at speaking English" I was so flattered.
It was just a sentence. ^^.
>>Correct
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