In Defence of Millennials
학생이 쓴 원문
I agree to some extent about defence of millennials.
I don\'t know that the word snowflakes has such as the historcal background incliding a racism.
I\'d like to talk with you this topic such as the racism and feminism this week.
강사 첨삭
Good day Ms. [이름]! Thank you for telling me of your interest in English conversation. I am sorry for not checking your composition before your class b I will definitely include this topic.
Stay well ~
Aki :)
I agree to some extent about defence of millennials.
>>> I agree to some extent about defense of millennials.
I don\'t know that the word snowflakes has such as the historcal background incliding a racism.
>>> I didn\'t know that the word \"snowflakes\" has something to do with a historical background including racism.
I\'d like to talk with you this topic such as the racism and feminism this week.
I\'d like to talk with you this topic such as the racism and feminism this week.
>>> I\'d like to talk with you about this topic: racism and feminism.
>>> I\'d like to talk with you about racism and feminism this week.
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