In every single moment,,,,

2014-11-25 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I think stress is sometimes useful. but too much quantity of it is not good for our health. It is known that not good for health, In the historical perspective, however it was good. Long time ago, Ape were suffering from cold weather, Probably It was very stressful thing for them. and the stress makes some development. They could make fire which can protect from cold weather. In every single moments, maybe we are getting some stress from enviroment, situation. But in the moments, we try to find an answer of it. We can feel requirments or desire from stressful time and we find the way to get through it. That's why I think stress is somtimes useful in our life. The result of stress is what we are seeing and touching. Prosperity is the master piesce of stress.

강사 첨삭

Yahoo! It is almost Wednesday. ^^

Thanks for continuously studying with me.

I hope that you are learning from our classes.

There are still much for to focus and don\'t forget to be guided by the corrections given.

Always aim higher. Stress is good but we have to know how to handle it.

There are pros and cons of it. Have a nice evening.
Teacher Nina


I think stress is sometimes useful.

>> correct
but too much quantity of it is not good for our health.

>> But too much is not good for our health.
It is known that not good for health, In the historical perspective, however it was good.

>> It is known that it is not good. In historical perspective, it was good.
Long time ago, Ape were suffering from cold weather, Probably It was very stressful thing for them.

>> Long time ago, apes were suffering from cold weather. Probably, it was a very stressful situation for them.

and the stress makes some development.

>> And the stress they experienced made some development.
They could make fire which can protect from cold weather.

>> They were able to make fire which protected them from cold weather.
In every single moments, maybe we are getting some stress from enviroment, situation.

>> In every single moment, maybe we are getting stress form the environment and various situations.

But in the moments, we try to find an answer of it.

>> But in those moments, we try to find an answer for it.
We can feel requirments or desire from stressful time and we find the way to get through it.

>> We might have some desires at that time and we find ways to get through it.
That\'s why I think stress is somtimes useful in our life.

>> correct (spelling check: sometimes ^^)
The result of stress is what we are seeing and touching.

>> Did you mean: The factors of stress are from what we see and feel.

>> OR: The result of stress are the things we do.
Prosperity is the master piesce of stress.

>> correct

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