In korea, halloween is not exist instead of it there is chrismas.
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I like christmas more than halloween.
>> I like Christmas more than Halloween.
>> I like celebrating Christmas more than Halloween.
I know it simply as a present buying day.
>> CORRECT
It need a money. And I have no girl friend to present a gift.
>> It needs money and I don\'t have a girlfriend to give presents to.
I see a pumpkin head postering in the market for the purpose of selling the goods.
>> I saw a pumpkin head posted at the market for selling purposes.
I don\'t know much about holloween day.
>> I don\'t know much about Halloween.
I know it is a simply ocidental holiday.
>> I know it simply as a Western holiday.
Thanks for reading.
>> CORRECT
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