In korea, halloween is not exist instead of it there is chrismas.

2018-10-23 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

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I like christmas more than halloween. I know it simply as a present buying day. It need a money. And I have no girl friend to present a gift. I see a pumpkin head postering in the market for the purpose of selling the goods. I don't know much about holloween day. I know it is a simply ocidental holiday. Thanks for reading. Bye.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Wee!

Thank you for doing your homework ^^

I hope you are having a great day!

Talk to you tomorrow ☺


I like christmas more than halloween.
>> I like Christmas more than Halloween.

>> I like celebrating Christmas more than Halloween.


I know it simply as a present buying day.

>> CORRECT


It need a money. And I have no girl friend to present a gift.
>> It needs money and I don\'t have a girlfriend to give presents to.


I see a pumpkin head postering in the market for the purpose of selling the goods.
>> I saw a pumpkin head posted at the market for selling purposes.


I don\'t know much about holloween day.

>> I don\'t know much about Halloween.


I know it is a simply ocidental holiday.
>> I know it simply as a Western holiday.


Thanks for reading.
>> CORRECT


Bye.

>> CORRECT

>> OR: Goodbye.

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